I liked the over all theme of this flash. My Little Hoagie is contagious like the real world counterpart of My Little Pony. This flash about summarizes what happens to an individual if they have witnessed an episode. I didn't really like the art style though. I'm not sure why, it just bugs me. Effects were pretty decent and everything flowed together. There's not much to criticize you on this (if any). I personally like the show, but I felt a little left out, lol. I mean, I'm a pegasister, and how would that term work in that alternate universe. lol! xD Still, I noticed you stopped posting as much as you used too. Please don't leave new grounds just yet! It may be boring and annoying, but it's your fans that want you here. Please don't let us down! Make more flashes! ^_^
Meh. I didn't enjoy this one as much as the others. It's more of the same. To me, it is nothing too new or interesting. Consistent corridor design is getting a little old, and your flash is extremely short. Not much content on this either. More than half of it was watching what the antagonists do in their free time. Patrol and smoke. Yippee. Uh, Last part was supposed to be a cliff hanger. It does draw my attention and I was wondering in my head, "That clown took the package. What could be in it?". I wasn't dying do find out what was in there, because this flash is incredibly vauge. Then again these "Incidents" are not cannon, so I shouldn't really be all that glum. Its more of the same. If you like that kind of stuff, I wont get in your way, but a change of venue would be nice from time to time. You can keep your infamous reds and grays, but buildings and deserts are way too overused in your flashes. As for the music, it didn't seem to fit with what was happening. It tries to beat you into anticipation of some action, but nothing really happens. Then near the end, the music just stops. Why? Why, oh Why did you make it stop? The one part that had action, and there's no music to back it up. We don't know if its a good situation or not. Odd use of the situational irony at the end. Also, why does the clown not have his mask on? I wonder. Unless its because an event that happened during the actual story, this does present many questions. Then again, this isn't canon, and it doesn't entirely have to make sense. Over all, I didn't really "love" this flash. Maybe you could mix things up a bit, Hmm? I like your series, but this was not your best try, Krinkels. C'mon. Make something that'll really knock our socks off! It is your special "Madness Day" after all. I hope to watch some more Madness later on in the future. Please, oh please add more locations and detail to your characters. It's like happy tree friends. Cute people murdering each other.
I'm really diggin' the art style. Very chibi like. If you make more submissions with this style, I would be very interested in an already interesting Flash. The music is catchy and it isn't bad. But some parts are a little odd. Like, the swords man at one part. He slices this ghost enemy, however the sound for it is delayed for a second. It's a minor issue, but it was noticeable. Another thing is that one part with the. . . News reporter? I don't know the name of that girl, but when the blue Elf guy yells out, she grinned. I liked that part, but when the elf guy yelled twice, She grinned, then she reverted back to her original pose, then grinned again in a rather erratic fashion, like a static. It doesn't seem to flow. I don't have an issue with it that much. One more thing. This is the most needed feature you need. Which you didn't have in this flash, which I was dismayed. A replay button. At the end. The screen just goes black, leaving you to wonder if anything is to come up in the abyss of darkness at the end of this unique flash. All of the things I pointed out were minor issues. Now, I think you should post this song in the Audio section of Newgrounds. I just love it. Hope to see more of this. ^_^
Bwaahhh... That was unexpected. Overly dramatic but I enjoyed it. ^_^
The voice work on this flash was just awful. Korra sounded likea dying old woman and why were they fighting to begin with?? Well, the animation was decent, but it was way too generic in my opinion. Things happened way too fast at times. The loading screen was just ugly. The beginning was choppy and gross, and the rest of this flash is all over the place before it ultimately settles for mediocrity and disappointment. In my opinion, this wasn't very entertaining.
The animation was pretty good, but the colors were a little... How would you say.. Bland? The backgrounds could use some more detail as well. Anyways, This flash only had 1 line, it could've used more. Like "Garrus, WATCH OUT!" or A cliche "NOOO!!!". This flash held sound affects to a minimum. You could've thrown in some more. Like when that reaper was looking around with it's eye thing, and even when it was raising up it's leg to kill those Elcor. Also when those Elcor were running, it could've used some sound affects as well like a stampede. But I get your message and in my opinion this was a pretty neat flash. I also just LOVE the fact you put Skyrim bear in there! :D
This is a movie many fans will enjoy. I am a fan myself! The beginning was a bit expected. I agree with Hysteria980's point about the gray corridors. It wouldn't hurt to make it in a bigger area? I know the style is an almost noir theme, but add a little variety yo mix things up please. Great animation nonetheless. There wasn't a moment I didn't enjoy the flash. I hope to see more of this in the future.
What a very dramatic story here. I watched your flash movie at least 5 times. It's nice to see something different, that someone is willing to deal with human emotions like fear, and lust. You weren't afraid to portray this in your flash and it was very moving. That makes it unique to other flashes.The fact that it was in another language added on to my imagination that it was in the future. The animation was superb, however it was a bit choppy at times, like at the beginning of it. The man moved a tad bit too fast, static. Maybe a bit more dialogue to explain some questions, Why are the "White" Robots superior?What made them that way? Is the white city surrounded by the ugly ghettos of the workers one big establishment or is it a living thriving city for the "White's"? Wouldn't someone who had been transformed have told everyone of the horrors of the lab when they "win"? Or are they controlled? And why do the "Whites" have an immense sex drive? Those are just some of my questions. I may have more, but I can't remember. I would like to see some more of your work, but just add a few explanations here and there. A little more dialogue wouldn't hurt. Over all, I would show it to a friend, however at first they would probably not fully understand the message. But in short, your flash was Very good. Would the Morale of the story involve having the main character changing on the inside, revealing that all he wanted was already inside him, or something along the lines? If it is, that's a good message. Cheers to you! ^_^
Well, I reaaaallly enjoyed that. Hope to see more! :D
This sure did make me lol alot throught the flash but it is just a review. Sexy voice btw! ;)
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